Hang in there! Your application requires a few tweaks before we can accept it. We would like to hear more about Henry's personality in the context of gameplay. The part where you talk about him being thrown into adventure could use fleshing out since he does spend a bulk of the game dealing with terror. We want to hear more about how he deals with the events that happen to him over the course of the game to flesh out his personality. Upon the posting of this revision notice, you have 72 hours to respond to us with the necessary edits. Thank you and good luck!
Welcome to Ryslig! Please reply to this comment with the character journal you intend to use in the game. After that, please join the following communities:
Joining the first three communities is mandatory though you may choose not to join the meme community if you prefer. After joining, please head on over to the TAKEN LIST and the PLAYER CONTACT LIST and leave a comment using the appropriate form. Note that the player contact list is member-locked so you'll have to be accepted into the OOC community first. Thank you.
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
rysligmods) wrote2013-11-01 08:22 pm
REVISIONS
Hang in there! Your application requires a few tweaks before we can accept it. We would like to hear more about Henry's personality in the context of gameplay. The part where you talk about him being thrown into adventure could use fleshing out since he does spend a bulk of the game dealing with terror. We want to hear more about how he deals with the events that happen to him over the course of the game to flesh out his personality. Upon the posting of this revision notice, you have 72 hours to respond to us with the necessary edits. Thank you and good luck!
no subject
ACCEPTED
Welcome to Ryslig! Please reply to this comment with the character journal you intend to use in the game. After that, please join the following communities:
Joining the first three communities is mandatory though you may choose not to join the meme community if you prefer. After joining, please head on over to the TAKEN LIST and the PLAYER CONTACT LIST and leave a comment using the appropriate form. Note that the player contact list is member-locked so you'll have to be accepted into the OOC community first. Thank you.